Wednesday, March 25, 2009

Fairy


Robert came to the forest for woods. While carrying the woods, he tripped himself and lost consciousness. He didn’t know how long it had been when he could feel the green light penetrated the leaves again. He was still closing his eyes, but put his hand to feel the pain on his head. Suddenly, he noticed something blocked the light and opened his eye to see if there was an animal next to him. It was a beast that he couldn't tell what it is. He could see the its teeth with hunger. Robert stood up immediately and walked backward slowly while he was still looking at the beast. While he was focusing on the eyes of the beast, he crash to something. It was a woman, who dressed differently from him, smiling at him. The woman sl0wly walked in front of Robert, faced the beast, saying something that Robert didn't understand. After listening to the woman, the beast turned around and disappeared from Robert's sight. He thanked her and invited her to go to his house to have dinner with his family. She only nodded and he figured she could not speak. The second day, everybody in the town heard that the woman has a special power. They thought she was a fairy and everybody asked her doing a favor. Robert's house became so crowdy everyday. People brought food to thank her, and Robert was pleased that he did not have to worry about the shortage of food anymore.
However, one day, Robert saw his neighbor left hishouse with food. Her eyes were filled with anger and disappointment. Then he knew, the fairy had lost her power. People stopped coming to his house and there was a rumor that the fairy actually was only a human living in the forest. Robert's family gradually went out of food and he could not keep this woman in his house anymore. He told her to leave the house. Still quietly, she left his house and walked back to the forest. Robert still went to the forest everyday, as nothing had happened.

6 comments:

  1. This was an interesting story and I think with more detail it could be really great. Try describing more of what had happened and maybe add a little more to the plot of the story. Good Job

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  2. I liked this a lot. That man was really lucky that the woman found and carried him out of the woods. Nice job.

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  3. Cute story! Even though it's disappointing that the fairy lost her power, I like how it ended...this was not expected.

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  4. This was cute. It reminds me of people trying to act like something they aren't. Then when they get caught bad things happen.

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  5. I really like this story. I really want to know what happened the the fairy.

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  6. I like the idea of believing in luck only to have it fail you. Very descriptive.

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